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Post by iamup2nogood345 on Aug 18, 2009 14:14:25 GMT -5
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About You - -
Name: Hailey Gender: Female Age: {optional} Years of RPG Experience: 1 or 2 Other: I guess Ive been Role playing for a while.
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Quick Quiz - -
How did you find us?Your affiliated to one of the RP sites I go on. What about ISS inspired you to join? I really like Harry Potter based RP sites and I hav`nt found any good ones lately. Do you have any suggestions for us? No
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About the CCharacter- -
Name: Ryan Cole Age:15 Gender:Female Year: 5th Face Claim: Marie Avgeropoulos
Canon or Original? Original
Facial Properties:
She has dark brown hair that reaches just passed her shoulders, and is straitened every morning before classes. Her face is angular and her chin is almost flat. She has always had a pretty face, and has never worn a lot of makeup. Ryan has plump lips and an unforgettable smile. Even though she her smile is beautiful, the first thing people usually notice about her is her eyes. Just above her high cheekbones, lay her naturally bright blue eyes. Her nose is small and curves in just the right places. Her ears are small and unpierced, though she wishes they were. Her teeth are straight and noticeably white.
Physique: {1+ paragraphs}
Ryan isn't exactly the tallest girl around, standing at a height of exactly 4'11'', but shes very proportionate. She is slightly muscle toned from the exercise she tries to get done as much as possible. Ryan has small hand and wrists that she has always liked about herself. Her feet are small to as she wears a united states size 4. Ryan`s chest is average sized chest and almost no hips. Shes very light for a fifteen year old weighing in at 93lbs.
Wand Type: Mahogany, 9 in sturdy Wand Expertise: Transfiguration and charms Patronus: An Eagle Boggart: Her in a confined space
Personality:
"I WILL study....Just not right now"
Ryan isnt exactly the most studious person, but she always makes sure to cram before a test. Her method actually works pretty well getting her average to high marks, and in her opinion thats good enough. She tries to get her younger sister to study and NOT be like her. It doesn't always work, but at least she tries.
I am SOOO not sarcastic....well maybe just a little. Naw really? Yes, Ryan is a pretty sarcastic person, although she tries to keep the sarcasm from being hurtful if she's speaking with friends. With enemies its obviously different, not that she tries to make enemies, they kind of just find her sometimes. She knows she's not perfect and some of her traits would probably grate on a lot of nerves. However, she isn't really a fan of confrontation either, so she tends to avoid it, and if that doesn't work she can always use her sarcasm. It usually just comes out when she's irritated, and that happens kind of often.
"I do NOT have a temper!!!!!!!!"
A terrible flaw of Ryan`s is her fiery temper. Getting on her bad side Isn't exactly a good idea. If you hurt her friends she`ll hurt you, and thats a promise. Ryan is also kind of gullible, and if you lie to her she`ll probably believe it. Eventually she finds out, and at that point you should be sleeping with BOTH eyes open.
Ive never been impulsive...Ooh Shiny!
Ryan has always been pretty impulsive, leading to her being rather reckless and having the annoying habit of speaking-before-thinking .It mostly just gets her into trouble. As if she needs to give people even more incentive to look out for her. Hers boiling point had been much too easy to reach in her opinion. Anyway, besides the impulsiveness, she's actually pretty responsible when it comes to most things.
Likes: + Her sister Hayley + Thunderstorms + Defense Against the Dark Arts + Wishing Wells + Stars + Music + Heights (Hang gliding, Para sailing, ect.) + Yellow things + The color red + Gold Jewelry + Spiky heels (anything to make her taller)
Dislikes: – Liars – Snakes – Confined spaces – Clouds – Black licorice – Fear – Potions (especially love potions) – Overly Obnoxious people – Egotistical People – Pureblood Mania
History:
Ryan Elizabeth Cole was born in NYC, New York on a quiet September 7th evening. Her mother was a witch and her father was a muggle, both well aware of magic. They were both hoping she would be a witch, and at age 7 she started showing magical powers like: levitating her mother`s high heels, and cookies from on top of the counter.
As she grew she was a real handful for her parents. She often created miniature thunder storms when she was angry, and then getting her, her clothes, and the carpet soaking wet. When Ryan was 9 years old her little sister, Hayley Cole was born just four days before her birthday. She was also a witch.
Ryan Went to muggle school for 6 years then she got her Hogwarts letter at age 10 (would turn 11 hat year)transported by a horned owl. Her parents were erupting with pride. The next day she was taken to diagon alley by her mother to get her supplies and an owl.
Bravely she boarded the Hogwarts express just a month later. She made many friends on the train, and buying them some candy didn't hurt her chances either. When the train arrived at Hogwarts she knew immediately that it was home. She was hoping on a certain house but refused to share it with others. She didn't like to be disappointed.
Sample Post:
The train hadn't even stopped and Ryan was already in complete, and total awe. "This is it?" she asked the boy sitting next to her, he nodded, probably feeling the same way she thought. But how was she feeling? Awestruck? Intimidated? Maybe even a little scared? Well maybe not scared, she thought again. She stopped the list at excited, because thats the word she had been looking for. The train shrieked to a stop. Getting of the train I honestly thought I was ready for anything, anything that is except a humongous hairy man holding a lantern.
I had to tilt up my head to look at him, "Hello!" I said. He looked down at me, Not a comfortable feeling. "Hello" He replied then I got into the boat and drifted towards the castle, which, close up was a lot bigger than I thought.
A professor gathered us just outside an extremely large door. When it opened all the first years piled in a clump up to the front trying to get a better view the Professor called names down the list , "Ryan Cole" she called. I looked up and slowly made my way to the front. I sat on the stool and squirmed a little, then she placed the sorting hat on my head I looked up at the brim and mentally hopped that the Sorting Hat was never wrong.
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I, Hailey, have read the rules, understand clearly what my responsibilities are now that I am joining ISS, and will abide by these standards set by the staff.
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Post by Professor Albus Dumbledore on Aug 18, 2009 14:37:02 GMT -5
You have the looks of a good start here, however it is unfortunately clear that you have not thoroughly read through our rules. First off, your username is incorrect. I had PMed you earlier about it – you will need to reregister with the proper naming. (You will need to likewise re-post your app – a new thread, please, which is why this application has been relocated.)
In regards to the application, please read the rules to find what belongs in the Other field. Also, the icons at the top must be 100x100 in size and it wouldn’t hurt to lengthen up your paragraphs, to add more detail. Finally, the sample post should be four paragraphs long.
Please make the necessary revisions and we can review your application again.
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