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Post by rosario on Aug 5, 2009 21:37:34 GMT -5
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About You - -
Name: Alex...HAI! Gender: Female Age: 15 Years of RPG Experience: 2.7 Other: [Removed by Staff]
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Quick Quiz - -
How did you find us? Add What about ISS inspired you to join? It's harry potter! Do you have any suggestions for us? Nope
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About the Character- -
Name:Rosario Amaretto Dawn Age: 14 Gender: Female Year: Fourth Face Claim: Amy Adams
Canon or Original? Original
Facial Properties: Rosario's face is sharp, with harsh features. Her cheekbones are high set, giving her a more elegant look instead of making her look like a house elf in face shape. She has rather heavily lidded eyes that are large and a brilliant shade of cobalt blue. What some people would say is her forehead is not too small, or not too big and perfect for bangs. Her jaw-line is somewhat weaker to contrast with her hight cheekbones. and her skin tone being a lighter somewhat porcelain color, rather pale with a hint of pinkish red.
Physique: Long and lanky, two words that best describes her. Rosario is rather tall for her family standing at about 5" 7' and a quarter(she has short relatives) and weighs a normal weight at around 103 - 110 pounds, it tends to vary on the season and such. Her torso is longer than most and her legs are wicked long with her size 9.5 shoe size, she's actually pretty proportionate for what it sounds. Her arms are the only non-proportionate part of her body, they are rather long and her arm span is a little longer than it's supposed to be.
Personality: Overall Rosario is just a girl trying to fit in with people who are like her family, wealthy and snobbish. At first glance Rosa is a total bitch to everyone else but she tends to loosen up her ways when they try to get to know her, which also at first glance can make her look rather prejudice against some groups of people. In a nutshell Rosario is trying to fit in so she can be considered a bitch at first, but don’t always go with that part of her personality, you always have to try to get to know her before you judge, she’s also very quiet only letting her opinion known if she’s trying to help someone, she’s also very intelligent when she wants to be and is usually optimistic about it as well but she usually has a short temperament so self control is rarely seen in her.
In detail, I said that she comes off as a bitch. I say this because her family is very wealthy and rather strict about the people she hangs out with, she doesn’t care, but she doesn’t want to hear it from her mother when she gets home for a holiday. Once you get to know Rosario, she tends to soften up and you can see her actual personality, the good side of her. You always want to stay on Rosario’s good side which is usually bubbly and slightly hyper most of the time, but quite and reserved at the same time which is hard to explain. Usually she has a very deep liking in any type of music although she tends to wander over to music with heavier guitar and such, and older music like The Beetles and for the more rock-ish side The Ramones. She also has a fascination with the songs that Hogwarts choir usually sings, and for some reason anything from Bollywood movies.
Besides her intentional wittiness, she is a lot more intelligent than she puts on, well, when she wants to be. About half the time she doesn’t even bother to think things through. Even though the doesn’t think before she speaks, when she does use her brain and speaks out she’s not afraid to voice her opinion even though she doesn’t care what people think. Rosario seems like a caring person when she’s not torturing first years, or anyone who dares get in the way of her goal(whatever that may be) she tends to be a little over protective of her friends. The thing is, say something rude and be prepared to have some curse flung at your face.
As I say Rosario has a very short temperament when she's not trying to be optimistic about things. Say someone frustrates her and she has decided to be optimistic that day, she would try and used all of her self control to try not to just walk up and kick them. Say on a day that she woke up and felt like crap and someone was to frustrate her, she would walk up and kick them displaying her painful lack of self control. Besides her lack of self control she actually is quite self contained and quiet on some days, often just sitting back and listening to what would be going on around her, instead of being in the action of whatever her friends where gossiping about. Sometimes if she's lucky someone would hurt one of her friends and she would be their shoulder to cry on, and she would try to help them get over it then as I explained in the previous paragraph, find the little git that hurt them and hex them, possibly turn them into some small rodent and just walk away, only if there are no teachers around.
Likes: + Laughing + Gossip + Rumors + Making fun of first years + Boys + Loud music + Speed Metal + Going to Hogsmeade + Firewhiskey + Snow Dislikes: – Prof. McGonagall – Mrs. Norris – Overall Cats – Rain – Temperatures over 85 degrees – Crying – Divination – Astronamy – Pizza – Rude humor against her or her family
History:Anna-Marie Alexander and Thomas Dawn. These are the two people who created Rosario and her younger and rather adorable little sister Constance. Thomas is from a line of all pureblood witches and wizards, and her mother not so much. Thomas himself was shunned from his side and Anna was kept and held dear to her family. When both bloodlines found out that Anna was pregnant with Rosario her family was overjoyed but Thomas’s family again not so much, or at least until they found out the child was pureblood, then they where attracted like flies to a bright light.
When Rosa was born, Anna’s family has almost been pushed out of the picture, being mostly mudbloods, but Anna’s parents refused to be out of Rosa’s life. They stayed with Anna and Thomas no matter what insults Thomas’ family flung at them. Thomas, who worked at the ministry, had gotten a huge promotion. Both families rejoiced over his victory.
Moving to baby Rosa was hell, even though she was only about a year old when they did, she had no toys, and no games to play they where all in boxes stored away where she couldn’t get into them, when they finally did move, their new house was HUGE it was more like a manor now than just the crappy house they originally had that had been falling apart for years. Right after they got comfortable, Anna and Thomas decided to have another child, hoping this one wouldn’t be bad as Rosario.
They where successful, four months after Rosario turned three, her sister Constance was born. That’s when Rosario’s behavior took a massive spiral downward, she started getting in fights, and that’s when they realized she could use magic, however Constance was born a muggle, destined to walk the lonely road of not being able to use magic. Soon Thomas decided to take Rosario out of school and have Anna home school her. This went on for several years, for eight to be exact while her sister went to muggle school and made her muggle friends.
At 11 she received her letter to go to Hogwarts. Overjoyed she immediately demanded her father take her to get her school stuff ready. The first place she went was Olivander’s, where it took quite a few tries but they found her wants a 12 ¼ in yew dragon heartstring. Rosario was overjoyed and paid the utmost attention to her father and what he was saying about the school and the classes she might get, their last stop was magical menagerie where she wandered over the a large brown owl and asked the man it’s name “Uzi” that is what he named the large brown great horned owl. She got the owl.
Now at her fourth year at Hogwarts she still has her owl, and now has become the biggest party girl in the world and is also the family star while Constance had been sent to her grandparents to live for a while, just for her mental state.
Sample Post: Paws barely hit the ground as the body that controlled them flew by. He couldn’t stop his flight right now if he tried, his heart pounding and his muscles aching; but the mental stress had kept him moving without hesitation. Nothing had been going right for him lately, and though eh wanted to fix it, he couldn’t summon up the power or the intelligence to do so. Now, with the biggest problem in his life facing him, how was he supposed to cope? Little friends, little family; his whole life had been put into his work. With that now gone, what was he supposed to do?
Another pang of hurt burst through him as he once again thought about how his pack had split up; members just leaving on their own at first, until it eventually climaxed to the point where the whole damn thing split. Far as he knew, there was only one pair that still stuck together, and that was Poison, their pup-sitter and Kane, the alpha. It was a good pair, strength and loyalty bonded together, but how would they manage once Kane started his rape-spree? Cael was no fool, he knew all about his father’s bad habits, though he acted quite contrite about it. He knew his place, and he knew it quite well; he didn’t want to lose it to his father overreacting.
Guess none of that mattered now though, did it? He was homeless now, and soon enough, the building would become a play-house for tons of strays. Had he chosen to stay there, he would have most likely been injured; attacked by one of the brutes that were sure to come around. Be it for food, or just for plain dominance, Cael knew he would be like a rag doll. He had mainly relied on family strength, not being the roughest dog around, nor the size to appear threatening. He knew his way around in a fight, but it was obvious that there was little to none in him.
Where would he go now, though? As soon as the news broke out, many of the dogs had just left, going their own way. Who was he supposed to turn to? Not Kane, his beloved and bossy father; he’d break down in no time around him. Not Poison; his loving caretaker since he was a puppy, knowing that neither of them necessarily knew one another anymore. Certainly not Demmy or Alice; ruining his chance with his brother when they got into a spat about power, and knowing Alice wouldn’t want such a weak kind to be around. She preferred brutality, and that he had little of. The only friend he could think of had been… and then it hit him.
“Motyo!” he spat out from his exhausted lungs, barely making it audible to even himself. Instantly his course of direction was set, and he tore off towards the park. He normally saw her around there or the hospital, or at least she had been when he had last seen her. Ever since she had had her puppies, things began to pick up around the pack, and he was therefore forced to work more heavily. That was all just a waste of his time, but hopefully his old friend would still accept him… and her puppies, as well.
Though about an hour passed of his constant running, in his mind he felt like nothing, as if he still needed just a little more time to beat out his anger and frustration. His mind had been begging for answers, that only one dog could give to him. His voice right about to burst out, ready to scream for all the things that had gone unexpected and horribly wrong, when an unexpected voice hit his ears audibly. “Stupid...You should go to...You better watch your...” Nearly scared to death of the sudden voice, he almost jumped to a stop. Was he… there already?
The park hadn’t always been his favorite place, but he still relatively knew things about it. The little voice that he had heard was not quite yet an adult, but too mature for a puppy. Though it had been some time since he had seen his friend and her puppies, he figured that they would be around the age of six months by now. Curiosity struck him, and instantly he turned to find the maker. Of course, it hadn’t been hard, and instantly he pulled up to the red male; looking rather similar to Cael when he was in his younger days.
“Dakoda?” It was a shot in the dark type of question, but he figured he had found out his friend’s hiding place; as well as her eldest son.
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And Finally - -
I, Lovely or Alex, have read the rules, understand clearly what my responsibilities are now that I am joining ISS, and will abide by these standards set by the staff.
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Andromeda Black
Ravenclaw Student[/b] Seventh Year (Second) Chaser Captain Head Girl Slug Club Member[/color]
staring at the sink of blood and crushed veneer
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Post by Andromeda Black on Aug 5, 2009 22:38:03 GMT -5
You've got some nice descriptions in your bio and overall it's well done but there are a few things that you'll need to look over before it can be accepted. An admin will be sorting her based on our opinion of her personality so you shouldn't have any references to what house she is in just yet. The personality is definitely promising but I'll ask that you expand on it a little bit, getting rid of the stuff about houses and focusing more on just describing her. Your history is interesting and yes, it's technically four paragraphs but it would be nice if you could expand a little bit on it as well (: And then maybe do a quick spell check of the whole thing and you should be good to go. It's definitely a promising start, it just needs a few little tweaks here and there XD
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Post by Professor Albus Dumbledore on Aug 6, 2009 0:58:08 GMT -5
Looks good. But I'm going to have to emphasize with what Kabby said, and ask that you expand on the personality field before we make any decisions. (:
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Narcissa Black
Sixth Year Prefect
so if I'm a liar & you're a thief, at least we both know where the other one sleeps
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Post by Narcissa Black on Aug 6, 2009 18:27:30 GMT -5
Careful with your PB, she looks a lot older than just 14 years old, so keep to her younger looking pics, otherwise we'll have to ask you to change her, mkay?
accepted
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