Steven Reese

[stevenreese]

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About You - -

Name: Moonz
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Years of RPG Experience: about 2 or 3
Other: Tis is Tiffany xD

Dobby

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Quick Quiz - -

How did you find us?I’m already a member =3
What about ISS inspired you to join? Activity and uniqueness and organization!
Do you have any suggestions for us? Nope.. IT is perfect =D

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About the Character- -

Name: Steven Reese
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Year: 6th
Face Claim: Ed Speleers

Canon or Original? Original

Facial Properties: Although his body is that of a god, his face tells something different. He has a childish face. His jaw never becoming prominent and his lips are poofy like a child’s. Although obviously a young-adult, he has the face of a 13 year old. It isn’t a horrible thing. His eyes are a calming shade of blue green. Depicting the sea. His nose is nothing special. He has unusually long eyelashes (for a male), and medium sized eyebrows. Not too busy, but not feminine.
Physique: Some may describe his physique that of a god. His masterfully sculpted chest is sure to make a girl swoon. His large muscles prove his strength and abilities. But he has no butt. Oh well, can’t get everything, right! Overall he is strong and possibly intimidating. Some may see him attractive, others scary.

Personality: Summary;;
His appearance does not align with his gentle personality. He is fun and caring. Though some may say a little too over-protective, which is why he cant hold a girlfriend for too long. He is very friendly, and wouldn’t hurt a fly. But some say he can get annoying. He bugs people constantly! He wants to know the latest things, and be friends with everyone. But this is difficult when people try to ignore him. This may be because they are intimidated by him, or think he would be naturally arrogant.
Gentle: He would eat moldy cheese with a rusty fork before he purposely hurt anyone. He considers your feelings before his. He is especially gentle around females for obvious reasons. To him they are like little glass dolls worth millions. You just wouldn’t shatter it. Infact, it has always been the woman to hurt him, not the other way around. He just cant find the will-power to lay his hands on another person. Sadly, he cant find himself to understand the female mind…

Cry-baby Someday you may find it upon yourself to call Steven gay. Maybe because he is a very sweet guy? Or his gentleness? OR maybe because of how easy he cries. No not about physical injuries! No, he has been heartbroken so many times, it scars him. Girls leave him because they want more of a “man”. He doesn’t know what they mean. He has big muscles, manly chest, why would they see him anywhere close to feminine? Either way, they would always leave him for someone else..

Protective He doesn’t allow independence. He doesn’t trust his girlfriend (for that time being..) to keep themselves safe. He doesn’t like them going in dark alleys alone, and he feels he must drive the car any chance he gets. Not many girls are too pleased at this behavior, but none of them have ever left the relationship with a bruise or scratch. Although he means well, the girls don’t see it that way.

Likes:
+ Quiditch (whether he plays or watches)
+ Night sky (he likes to look up at it)
+ Any magical creature (especially dragons)
+ Dogs
+ to Swim (even in the cold lake!)
+ To workout
+ Art
+ Music
+ Chocolate (yum)
+ Forbidden Forest (what with all the creatures…)
Dislikes:
ö Potions class
ö risky stuff
ö boring people
ö snow
ö Normal people (BORING!)
ö Narcissism
ö Greasy hair
ö Red hair
ö Eye Glasses
ö The smell of Cheese

History:
Marie and Jonathan Reese lived in a small muggle town. Jonathan was a wizard, but his wife did not want to have anything to do with the wizarding world. Jonathan loved his wife so much, he gave up his old world. He kept his wand, just in case. His wife didn’t have problems with wizards, she just didn’t want to live like that. She was muggle born, and such things were very much weird. Jonathan and Marie met by bumping into each other. They had coffee and learned they had much a like. They were both 17 at the time, and rather than spending his holidays with his family, he would spend time with Marie. After he barely graduated Hogwarts (his mind always on Marie), they got married. Marie knew very little of Jonathan’s life as a wizard, when she did she was furious. When she found out she was pregnant, Jonathan made up the decision to raise a family. Steven was their only child.

Steven had never heard of his father’s past. He knew he wasn’t normal. Especially when he started being able to make people’s eyebrow hair grow if he looked at them. His father chose to ignore the signs, even though he knew them very well. His worst fear was to upset Marie. He knew if Hogwarts invited Steven, he would have no choice but to oblige. When the owl swooped in and dropped the letter, Marie almost went hay-wire. It took a few days for her to recover. She soon accepted the fact that her son would be a wizard. Steven was awe-struck. He listened to his father tell him all about Hogwarts, getting excited even more as his father progressed.

His first year felt like the worst of his life. He could never get the work. He was confused easily, and his progress slumped. He became lonely and felt isolated. He had friends, but none were very good ones. He kept this from his family, especially his mum, and tried hard to have a good time. In his second year, he did better in school, but still felt utterly alone. IN his third he finally got good friends. But most of all, he met a girl. They dated for almost a year. It was summer time, and he sat in his room doing his homework. In swooped her lovely owl, carrying a letter. It dropped in his hands. He ripped it open and it said:
“Dear Steven,
I cant put up with it anymore! You are always mailing me to see if I am alright! I can take care of myself! Look, your sweet and all to care. But I don’t think we should see each other anymore”

Steven was left heartbroken. Who breaks up with someone through owl mail!? Jeesh! Ever since then things had stayed pretty normal. His life had many ups-and-downs when it came to girls. You could say he had rough time keeping a steady relationship. None of the girls ever hated him (or made it look that way atleast), but they did end up insulting him usually. This was good because it made it easier for him to hate them which in turn made it easier to get over them.

Sample Post:
The inky black canvas stretched overhead. Stars twinkled in the heavens, and a large full moon shined high. The enticing waters outstretched before them reflected the light in the sky. A cool breeze made the waters lap at their bare feet. Perfect for this cool summer night. Although she was in a tanktop and capris, it was no matter. His warm body pressed next to hers kept her a comfortable heat. Her body rested in his arms. They were bathed in moonlight, leaving their skin a livid color. The aspen trees behind them created a harmonic, and alluring sound. It was a night she was surely never to forget. Nothing could come between her and the astonishing infatuation for the man beside her.

Their lips brushed acrossed eachother. They were tangled together, covered in sand because they were soaked from their swim earlier. His lips came up her neck, and reached her ear. Softly he spoke, almost silently, "i love you"

Her eyes met his. She did not have to say it back, nor did she have time, becuase his lips were on hers. For a moment, she thought she was in heaven. She grasped his light brown hair. her wavy, dark brown hair, was plastered to her neck, but his hair was already dry. He was still in his shorts. She in her tanktop and capris. Slowly, she lifted up from the perfect moment. She took off her shirt and pants so that she was in her bathing suit. Instinctfully, he lifted himself up, also.

She stepped into the warm water, a little colder than bath water, and let herself be engulfed by the waves. He came shortly after, pulling her into his arms once more. Their kisses became longer, and she soon forgot every worry and just trusted him to love her for life....

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And Finally - -

I, Moonz, have read the rules, understand clearly what my responsibilities are now that I am joining ISS, and will abide by these standards set by the staff.

[Andromeda Black]

Hey! Great to see you getting started with a second character There are just a few things I'd like to point out that you'll need to work on before I can actually accept him.

The bio looks nicely put together and all that, the one thing that's jumping out at me is the fact that Steven seems a bit Gary Stu-ish. He's too perfect, doesn't seem to really have any flaws. Plus, you use a lot of lines that would typical would a Gary Stu (overly perfect) character: "Some may describe his physique that of a god. His masterfully sculpted chest is sure to make a girl swoon." Try and stick to a more realistic description. You also might want to make the physique a few sentences longer.

You'll need to go back over it, maybe take out some of the lines that make him seem uber-perfect, give him some flaws. After all, flaws are what make a person interesting, don't be afraid to delve into them with him XD

So yeah! If you could just work on that a bit, make him more real, then there shouldn't be any trouble with getting him accepted.

[stevenreese]

Yeah... I was afraid of that.. OKay.. I will work on that =]

[bella]

Please post here once it’s updated.

[Professor Albus Dumbledore]

Failure to update.

Denied.