Submissions Application

[daniberry]

ABOUT THE CHARACTER
Name: Benjamine Darveoux
Age: She is eleven and going into her first year.
Gender: Female
Year: First
Celebrity: Destinee Monroe

Canon or Original? Original

Facial Properties:{1+ paragraphs} Benjamine has hazel eyes and shaped eyebrows. She has long, layered blond hair that is parted to the side and modestly tanned skin. She has modest sized lips and a cute, curved nose. She has a very sweet and charming smile. She does not have defined cheekbones, but rather full cheeks.
Physique:{1+ paragraphs} She is not outrageously skinny, but she is definitely not overweight. She has a full but and modest sized breasts. She is on the shorter side, but not midget-like. Her legs are proportionate to the rest of her body, so there is no freakishly long legs. She has average sized feet and small hands.

Personality:{4+ paragraphs} Benjamine is her own person. She is not afraid to be herself no matter how intimidating the situation may be, but she always keeps respect in mind.

Benjamine doesn't mind being independent, but also likes the thrill of being with friends. She loves to party, but isn't a party-girl (she loves having a fun time but is not irresponsible). She has always made friends pretty easily because she has such a bubbly personality. Just because she has a bubbly personality doesn't mean that she talks a lot. She is somewhat quiet which can confuse those who don't know her very well.

She loves clothes. She isn't your typical fashionista though. She often wears dark clothing, which can often be misleading. She is not a dark person, she just likes wearing edgier clothing.

Benjamine is a really talented singer, but really wants to grow up and do something in the magical world. Her dream job would be to be a staff member at St. Mungo's Hospital. She loves to work with and help others.

Likes: People with a lot of common sense, respect, and sketching in her sketch pad that she's had since she was a little girl.
Dislikes: She hates when others act like they know everything when they obviously don't, talk with their mouth full of food, and studying for awfully long periods of time.

History:{4+ paragraphs} Benjamine is a muggleborn who thinks that she is a pureblood. When she was born, her birth parents found out that she was a witch, so they immediately rejected her and gave her up for adoption. Then, a young wizard and witch couple adopted her and never told her that she wasn't their child by blood.

She has lived her entire life thinking that she was a pureblood. When she is in her third year, her foster parents will start acting funny and she will have discovered her entire past by sixth year.

She first discovered magic at Christmas. She was three years old and had just received a new doll house. She was so excited over one of the dolls, that it started levitating and spraying pink sparkles. Ever since, making things float has been relatively easy for her.

Seven Christmas's followed. On that tenth Christmas of her life, she received a pink and black Tye Dye Pigmy Puff. She named her Pigmy Puff Paris, to remind her of her hometown because she knew that she would be leaving the following fall for Hogwarts.

ABOUT YOU
Name: D.J.
Years of Experience: 2 years
Sample Post: {4+ paragraphs} The French blond walked into the Common Room of her House. She breathed in the aroma that she would have to get used to, after all she would be spending seven more years here. It wasn't a bad smell, it was just one that she wasn't used to.

She came from the warm streets of Paris, France where the sweet smell of fresh-baked crescents and homemade soups filled the air. She missed those beautiful walks on the cobble-stone streets, where everyone said hello to you. She had never felt homesick before, but this new feeling was starting to kick in.

She plopped herself down on the couch, giving a smile to anyone that looked her way. She smoothed out her orange and red jumper and pulled up her black and white striped leggings. She slipped off her red Converse shoes and tucked her legs up on the couch where the rest of her body was.

She pulled out her student schedule and homemade map she'd received from an older student. She grabbed a quill and marked the locations of her classes on the map. She hoped that the map was accurate. If not, she would surely be late for all of her classes.
Other: ELVES

[Professor Albus Dumbledore]

All fields needs to be lengthened. A paragraph is considered four-five decent sentences. Also, you can remove the "{1+ paragraphs}" - we know our own requirements. ;]

IZZY

[Professor Albus Dumbledore]

Failure to return and make modifications to your application is just bad manners.

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