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Post by avery on Feb 6, 2010 7:19:28 GMT -5
__________________________________________________________{ A B O U T . Y O U } Name: Rena Gender: Female Age: 18 E-mail: SlytherinGrl09@hotmail.com Twitter: {optional} Years of RPG Experience: 6 years Other: Teddy
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{ Q U I C K . Q U I Z } How did you find us? already on here… What about ISS inspired you to join? love this kind of rping Do you have any suggestions for us? nope nothing at this time
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{ A B O U T . T H E . C H A R A C T E R } Name: Rowan Victor Avery Age: 17 Gender: Male Year: 7th Face Claim: Drake Bell
Canon or Original? Canon
Facial Properties:
Pretty simple Avery is one who looks to have an almost pure complection except for the occasional zit here and there. Almost pure white like the rest of his body Avery has his crystal green eyes which seem to attract a lot of attention to himself even with his wicked personality. Straight nosed Avery keeps an almost sneer on his face a lot unless he is playing it up for his benefit on things hardly ever will you not see him in a seemingly haughty mood and ready to cause trouble.
Physique:
Avery keeps himself slim and slightly chest toned. He is around 5’10” or maybe taller, but close enough to 6’ that he seems to tower over a few different guys in his house. Being limber like he is though with a slight bit of muscle on him he seems to be quite weak, but isn’t as weak physically as many make him out to be. He has a little pudge on him, but not enough to cause him any true trouble. Many look up to him as a trouble maker who seems to somehow even at his height can sneak here and there without any trouble or pain.
Wand Type: 9” red oak with dragon’s scale Wand Expertise: dark arts as well as defense spells Patronus: black panther Boggart: Spider
Personality:
A mildly messed up and losing his mind boy Avery is known as the trouble maker. He seems to be a mild mannered boy when people are around him that know him very close knit he is so mild that he even seems silent at that. Working his mind around everything from what he believes is fun which is torture to dealing with dumb people in school though like that lily evans! She drives him up the walls always trying to spoil his and his pals fun. For this he is known as a crazy boy in school as well for one minute he could be really silent and the next he will be quick as lightning and loud.
Being known as a trouble maker though he has been seen several times in the back of the detention mumbling to himself and smirking. He will laugh here and there when in class randomly or at something he hears that may or may not be there making him slightly skitzo. He is always around those of his pals that love to cause mayhem and mischief those including Bellatrix, Lucius and a few other people who have graduated sadly thus he isn’t left with to many of his old pals.
In school he is also known as a heartbreaker. For being so “hot” as many girls like to say and “devilishly clever” as the guys put it Avery has himself put in a league of “Does he care? Or is he just the heartbreaking player?” All in all even though evil and skitzo as fuck this boy does unknown to anyone have a slightly sweet side. When alone with whomever he dates he is really sweet, but being a user as well his relationships have never really worked out.
Fighting is what Avery loves the most besides torturing humans and creatures alike. He loves absolutely loves to torment people he hates especially girls, but in all reality he prefers the torture and very slow torture of creatures. He likes to toy with them it is amazingly fun for him to sit around or run around and torture them on school grounds with spells or watch his friends stupidly try to accomplish the same feat as him in that attrospect. When it comes to fighting though he is more talk then anything. Though he will get in a fist fight here and there he prefers more to talk smack unless he can use his spells so he prefers to get revenge whilst in school where he can use his wand and not get in trouble as easily as it is when he’s outside of school and “is supposed to use magic” for if he does then he will get expelled something surprisingly he don’t want.
Likes: + torturing + bullying + smoking + drinking + fighting + being a heartbreaker + rock music + flirting + being skitzo + violence
Dislikes: – preps – tattle tails – drama bringers – trash talkers (about him or his friends) – most classes – prissy girly girls – physical pain (to himself) – egotistical bitches – cry babies – fat people
History:
Born to a Death Eater father you really believe that this boy is going to be any good? OF COURSE NOT! Even from the start Rowan Victor Avery was a trouble maker and a hard headed boy. He was someone who seemed to care about no one, but himself not even his family for the longest time. His older sister called him so sadistic it wasn’t even funny. When he was growing up trying to keep himself entertained wasn’t that easy that is until he found himself entertained with pain. Though pain to himself was something that hit him hard and made him mad the pain on others was pure and utter enjoyment to him. His pass time from a young age was torturing young creatures. He loved taking fire and setting dead things or what he called his “toys” on fire. He loved it even more to watch his fear of spiders slightly go up in flames by lighting them on fire and listening to them scream! It was so funny to him.
As he got older he slowly became a heartbreaker. Many young girls whom his parents tried to “court” him with young woman all of which he would use as rag dolls normally and then get bored and quit playing with them and send them away crying. This did to a point worry his mother, but his father to a point was proud for it showed his son was growing up to understand he didn’t need a woman and one was only a burden. The only use for a woman to an Avery was to produce their predecessor as well as cook and clean, but even though his father would want a grand child to carry on the name he still found it good that his son didn’t let woman burden him from keeping the site of the goal which was to in later years become a death eater just like his father.
When Avery entered school not long after his eleventh birthday he slowly made very close friends with those who were sons and daughters of people his father “worked” with. They were people who seemed to be a good close knit group for his son to associate with thus why Avery Sr. made sure he stuck around them when the summer times would come. Avery and his friend Mulciber amused themselves by playing nasty pranks on other students, including Mary Macdonald, on whom Mulciber tried to use Dark Magic during the 1975-1976 school year. Avery was also a friend of Severus Snape, something that bothered Lily Evans, who was Snape's best friend at the time. She found Avery's sense of humour to be very sadistic and could not understand how Snape could associate with him. According to Sirius Black, Avery was part of a "gang of Slytherins" who later become Death Eaters and also included Bellatrix Black, Roldolphus Lestrange, Evan Rosier, Snape, and Wilkes.
As his seventh year is coming around as a Slytherin Avery revalishes in the excitement of finally leaving Hogwarts after this year and joining his fellow friends in the leagues of Death Eaters. Though not as loyal as many of his friends are Avery does look to glorify himself and prove himself as a fellow hater of muggles and toturer in the leagues of Voldemorts followers. Pushing himself through each day so he can prove himself to those who are already fully entitled Death Eaters Avery fights his way hoping to get to the top.
Sample Post:
Avery’s lean tall body maneuvered around the school ready for his next fight. Being in a very foul mood because one of the teachers had given him another detention for getting back at a little bitch Avery didn’t want to deal with anyone else. As he moved towards his destination his usual sneer on his face with a slight frown added Avery slowly and very silently stalked his way towards the picture to his house. As he made it there he slowly looked at the man there and said the passcode… or more like mumbled it before crawling his way into his home room. As a few of his friends and housemates stared at him he threw them a happy smirk and headed towards his own room which he of course shared.
He wasn’t sure what he was going to do about that stupid bitch whom kept stalking him and causing him trouble when he already had enough trouble as it was. His dad thought the girl was a sweetheart, but in reality she was a menace! Pushing his hoodie down and then throwing himself onto the bed that was claimed as his Avery thought about things that had been going on. He may be a player in his own right and a skitzo… he paused for a second and kind of laughed at that last quality, but he also had a slight heart no matter how screwed up it might be. He was slowly wanting to find someone that he could settle down with which in all reality was weird, but with this stalker bitch it was hard to find anyone who would care about him.
As he thought about this stuff slowly he heard mumbling near his door, but was sure it was younger Slytherins talking about classes and how stupid each of the teachers were which he did have to agree they were. As he sighed once more trying to remember somewhat he knew he had to do today Avery’s thoughts were interrupted as someone began yelling. He couldn’t place whom it was, but because it had ruined his concentration Avery stood quickly and stormed to the door before finally throwing it open.
“Ok I don’t know what the hell is going on out here, but shut up or take it elsewhere so us who are actually trying to think don’t get disturbed!” As he shouted this out the door as it slammed against the wall the two guys bickering shut up right away and looked at them with such fury that it wasn’t even funny. As he stood there fuming about ready to start yelling once more the two ran off in different directions, “that’s what I thought…” he mumbled and then turned around and slammed the door behind him as he returned slowly to his bed.
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{ C O N T R A C T } I solemnly swear that I, RENA, have read the rules, understand clearly what my responsibilities are now that I am joining ISS, and will abide by these standards set by the staff.
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Andromeda Black
Ravenclaw Student[/b] Seventh Year (Second) Chaser Captain Head Girl Slug Club Member[/color]
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Post by Andromeda Black on Feb 6, 2010 18:12:27 GMT -5
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However! I just wanted to point out that in a few areas of the application, the grammar and sentence structuring could use a bit of work, what with punctuation and all. Your ideas are great but it got a bit confusing and you might want to edit your writing a bit more when you're posting, that's all (:
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