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Post by renata on Dec 18, 2009 17:20:20 GMT -5
__________________________________________________________{ A B O U T . Y O U } Name: Renata (unless asked i'm not giving out my real name) Gender: Female Age: 18 E-mail: SlytherinGrl09@hotmail.com Twitter: {optional} Years of RPG Experience: 6 years Other: Teddy...
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{ Q U I C K . Q U I Z } How did you find us? google What about ISS inspired you to join? I love Harry Potter and really like this group when they are younger... Do you have any suggestions for us? none at this time...
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{ A B O U T . T H E . C H A R A C T E R } Name: Renata Eliza Hollows Age: 16 Gender: Female Year: 6th Face Claim: Christian Serratos
Canon or Original? Original
Facial Properties: When it comes to Rena's face it seems to be simple, pretty, but above all probably average. She has deep crystal blue eyes that seem to give off a hint of beauty, but a slight hatred underneath. Her face is pretty smooth except for the occasion agrivating pimple and such which she tries to cover with her hair or make-up. She is pretty pale, but her lips are quite full and red. She is normally found with make-up on to make herself appear more beautiful, but in reality like many girl's her age she doesn't believe she is that pretty even if she gets a compliment here or there...
Her hair is long and brown most of the time, but on occasion she has it dark enough to almost appear black. Her cheeks are raised slightly making her appear with a smirk a lot, but at other times it may be that she is still angered or saddened like most teens.
Physique: Small and slightly petite Rena is quite thin, but has the average weight of around 130 or so. She is around the heighth of five foot four inches or so and seems to delve high in being a bit taller for she appears taller in her boots that accompany her outfit almost everyday when outside of hogwarts or when no class happens to be in session. She has a few piercings two in each ear normally studs and then one hidden on her belly.
Wand Type: Willow 8" sharp and slightly flexible. Wand Expertise: Defensive Spells Patronus: black vixen Boggart: Spiders... surprisingly enough this tough girl is scared of any sized spider... Personality:
Growing up as a girl who seemed to be a loner in the years of being in Hogwarts Rena has completely let herself become dark. She may be brunette when it comes to her hair, but she is black in her heart. When it comes to describing her it can come down to a few short words: Almost emotionless, Dying inside, sarcastic... Those things mainly can up and sum her up. She seems to be the one who will be in the middle of a fight most days. She has become someone who will love one moment and then rip you to pieces the next. She wants to care to a point, but on the outside she doesn't show it unless around those that she fully trust which isn't that many people.
Drawing on the emotions of those around her she takes on the pain that all her friends harbor. Though she doesn't have that many friends she will take on what they are having trouble with. She even gets into fights for them. Even though most don't know this girl her friends do and though she is pretty heartless to most she is actually caring, but that is only to those who are near her and mean something to her. After being left for dead mainly when she was younger she seems to defend those who have issues like hers. She is slightly spazzy towards those that mess with her or her small group of friends and those relatives that she has anything to do with.
She pushes herself to the limit sometimes. She has a heartfelt mission to prove herself to those who think her so lowly. She wants to prove to her family especially those that abandoned her that the lowly "trash" that they threw aside is more then anything that they would have ever thought she would be. She is someone who is hard to get through to. She has a hard shell around her heart and her trust is slim. She doesn't like to let people in or even trust people unless she has known them for a good while. Pushing most people who try to get near her or even think they understand away Rena is the one who is known as Venom in the school. Thats kind of her nickname around there it don't matter what house it is even her own friends think she is slightly venomous and sometimes a little to harsh on people.
Though she wants to learn to open up more again after the years that she feels she was hurt Rena is still having slight problems opening up for she seems to have made a good amount of people who seem to despise her, but to a point she wants to fix that. It won't help that she has her temper. She believes she may have a total mood disorder because her moods will go from being happy to ticked off within seconds. She wants to figure things out with herself, but its tough when she about snaps on everyone who comes near her now adays.
Likes: + Vixens + Snakes + The color black + Rap + Rock + dragons + Magic + Defense against the dark arts + Transfiguration + guys Dislikes: – Liars – Cheaters – Most people – Posers – People who like to talk about her – A lot of her family – Cats – most girls – People who think they can hurt someone and can't or won't – Tazors (she got shocked by one once and hated them since)
History:
Have you ever seen someone so broken that they want to put a gun to their head? Meet Renata Eliza Hollows. Though many don't see this girl for anything, but a shadow or someone who seems to be invisible Renata is someone who has been through a lot. After basically being abandoned by her family around a year ago except her older brother Kaster Renata is a wonderer. She lives now with her older brother, but she is hardly ever home. Renata is a loner and always has been. She likes to move through as a silent girl with a venomous feeling in her heart.
When she was born sixteen years ago Rena was someone who seemed to be very pretty and beautiful to many around her. Her parents were the ones who were poser parents though. On the outside and in the community they liked to play it that they loved their children and cared for them. They even had a spic and span house to where when people came into it it was full of glass cabinets and neat furniture not one thing being out of place, but when it came down to it Renata didn't have a easy childhood...
Ever since Rena was little she believed she wasn't meant to be fully human and because of this she began getting into the art of Vampirism and other Sci-fi things. Rena loves blood and biting thus she is found around the darker crew at school who seem to follow in her feelings. Unless she is with her crew which is mostly dark emo style kids she is in fights. Rena doesn't like to be around people much though either in so she doesn't hang with her crew very much.
Rena is very much into Vampirism she has her own fangs top and bottom and she even this may be scary to think, but when she gets excited and sexual she bites until she draws blood and can take nips of it. She has never understood why she feels like that, but the iron feel and sweet taste of blood makes her feel free and alive. Thus why she is into dark spells as well in the school. She feels that it will make her feel more alive.
Part of the reason she is so violent to a point with this stuff is that she was physically abused when she was younger thus she began to love the feel of pain. Unlike most people who begin to curl inward and hate pain she has grown to love it. The harder you bite and hit her the stronger she becomes. She feels that someone shouldn't have to be pushed around though for she doesn't want anyone to feel the same way she does. She is an empty shell mostly having almost no feelings anymore besides hatred and the love of pain. Anytime she hears about violence towards someone she hangs with like the stuck-ups and bullies of the school she takes care of it and most have never come back for more... This is all pulled together from her father beating the shit out of her when she was little. He was a heavy drinker and woman beater making Rena wonder why did her mother put up with all the torture? As Rena got older and her brother finally found a way out of the torture disappearing into the shadows of the family Rena became the target of all the torture. Each night her father would come home yell at her give her her usual beating and then he would pass out on the couch while she would hobble upstairs almost sick from the smell of the alcohol and all the beatings.
When she got her letter for Hogwarts six years ago Rena was so glad to be getting out of the home she had grown up in for eleven years. She was going to go away to somewhere where she thought she could be special, but in all reality her paleness and silence in her personality made many hate her. She was someone that seemed to follow her own path she would even get into fights with people for the smallest things. She has become a big fan of some of what the school calls Muggle music. It was always her friend when she was younger and now it is mostly her friend besides her friends or what she calls her crew.
Now in her sixth year Rena is working her hardest to pull away from all the hatred, but still even though she no longer has to deal with her parents for her brother finally got custody of her after a battle of a drunken dad and a mother who didn't even try to notice Rena still holds that hatred in her heart, but she hopes to pull it all away and finally maybe get out of it... Even if it means she has to take down a few people...
Sample Post:
So simple isn't it? Waiting and watching as the small innocent ones walk through this world oblivious? Rena's eyes closed as she took a breath in trying to pull herself into a feeling of security. As she stood next to Damien a friend of hers waiting for her brother to come pick her up Rena frowned listening to people talk and wander around her, "Stupid f**ks..." she said as she smirked finally. Feeling Damien's hand on her shoulder she looked up into his eyes which were almost as dark as her own when she was angry, but Damien's eyes were naturally like that.
Damien wasn't much of a talker unless of course it was on a subject he felt he could get into which wasn't many subjects Rena had to admit she hadn't heard hardly a word out of him. As her dark eyes bore into his own she felt him trying to tell her something, but really she couldn't read Damien not many people could even if they had known him for a a good few years. Sighing as she finally pushed herself away from the wall of the train station Rena looked around getting very impatient.
"Can he be any slower?!" she finally said agitated. She didn't like waiting every day for her brother. It was quite ridiculous to wait for someone that even though they cared didn't show it much. Kaster was a soft hearted guy, but he was a hard one to understand as well. Finally though Kaster's blue mustang which was very much out of place in a place like Forks pulled up, "Finally..." she grumbled. Looking over at Damien she nodded smiled lightly and ran off.
As she made it to the car she jumped in almost litterly. She was in a good mood now that her brother finally decided to show up. Waiting and waiting for him to pick her up after being at that damned school for so many months killed her. Looking over at her brother who seemed in a out of it mood she shook her head and waited for him to address her. She could feel that in the mood he was in right now that he obviously didn't want to talk. So it was a wait and see moment for her. Shaking her head as she thought about what could possibly be making him seem so out of it she giggled after a few seconds it was good to be back... so damn good...
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{ C O N T R A C T } I solemnly swear that I, Renata, have read the rules, understand clearly what my responsibilities are now that I am joining ISS, and will abide by these standards set by the staff.
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Andromeda Black
Ravenclaw Student[/b] Seventh Year (Second) Chaser Captain Head Girl Slug Club Member[/color]
staring at the sink of blood and crushed veneer
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Post by Andromeda Black on Dec 18, 2009 19:48:58 GMT -5
You've got a great start for your application here and Renata seems really interesting but I'm gonna have to be a nitpicky admin for a sec here. While you do have four paragraphs for her history, they seem to mostly just be additional facts about her personality more than information on when she was born, life growing up, family, etc. So if you could maybe fix that up a little bit, it'd be much appreciated and I'll be able to sort her then.
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Post by renata on Dec 19, 2009 10:56:26 GMT -5
ok finished! i hope this works now ;D
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Andromeda Black
Ravenclaw Student[/b] Seventh Year (Second) Chaser Captain Head Girl Slug Club Member[/color]
staring at the sink of blood and crushed veneer
Posts: 1,546
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Post by Andromeda Black on Dec 19, 2009 12:33:07 GMT -5
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